Now I am going to write a fanfiction called 'Destiny of my life' which came from a movie 'The Holiday'. I made a new title for my fanfiction. I hope you enjoy it and remain some comments about my story :)
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Ammanda is a professional and famous movie maker in L.A. She has beautiful face, lots of money and wide personal connections. Although she got everything, she has a love problem which is a biggest one. Her boyfriend fell in love with his young secretary. She got shock and despair of everything.
"How can he did to me ! He proposed me and we are getting married soon" she cried.
"Oh my god ! He is a bad guy !! You should ignore him and change your mind that he is not your mate." said Sarah. Sarah is Ammanda's best friend, colleague and also her neighbour. When Ammanda calls, she always comes as fast as possible.
The holiday is coming and everyone is planning the schedules and looking forward to start of it.
"What will you do Ammanda ?" asked Sarah.
"I am not sure...but I think I will stay at home." answered Ammanda.
"This is a long holiday!!! That will be wasteful to just stay at home."
"I know but My feels not want to enjoy the holiday this year."
"Oh..okay"
Sarah want to make happy when she saw her gloomy face. 'Ammanda had a hard time last few days. How can I make her smile? Hum...' Sarah whispered herself.
A few days later, the Christmas is coming next week.
Sarah calls Ammanda with a louder voice. "Hey! I have a present for your Christmas holiday next week."
"Calm down Sarah. I will just stay at home"
"It will be really great for you. You can get a chance to go England! HOME EXCHANGE "
"Home exchange?"
"Yes! Exchange your house for your two weeks holiday. Isn't it sound interesting?"
"Well.. I will think about it"
"NO! You have to go! I have already book it! It is only two weeks and the place is England!! You shouldn't hesitate this chance."
"Okay Sarah, I will go so don't interrupt me. I am working now! I have a important appointment tomorrow."
"Come my house and having dinner together" Sarah said with a satisfied smile.
At that night, Ammanda comes at Sarah's house.
"How did you figure out this plan?" Ammanda asked.
"You know I am genius haha. So Iris who will change home is a writer of popular wedding coulmnist. I met her on on-line and her boyfriend announce that engaged with other woman in front of her. I think you both need a turningpoint so I suggest her and she agreed."
"Right. As you said, I need a turningpoint. When is it?"
As a long holiday starts, Ammanda arrived at Iris's house.
"Well, it is only two weeks" Ammanda sighed. She feels strange to a new house.
Someone knocking at the door.
In England.
"Oh, Hello. Who are you?" said Graham.
"Hi. I am Ammanda. The house owner and I change our home for two weeks."
"Really? Iris didn't tell me any notice so..oh sorry, I am Iris's brother. Can I come in?"
"Sure"
Ammanda and Graham getting closer and met frequently.
They felt friendly and soon falling in love.
After two weeks later, it is time to go back their real life again.
At the airport, Ammanda and Graham standing in front of gate and staring each other's eyes
"Time goes really fast isn't it?" Ammanda was trying not cry.
"....Yes" Graham answered.
"I will miss you Graham. If you visit L.A, call me"
"I will...G..Goodbye Ammanda."
They say goodbye with smiling face.
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"Ammanda! Hey!! Wake up!! How could you overslept today?" Sarah called her with loudly voice.
"Sarah, what's going on?"
"You your flight!"
"What are you talking about? I had..."
"Did you dream something? Today was the start date of your holiday that I told you before"
"Oh my god. Everything was a dream..?"
"What dream? Anyway you can't go..I think Iris might be arrived in L.A. Let's have a welcoming party for her. Isn't it great idea?"
"Okay."
Ammanda couldn't believe this situation. It wasn't a real! Everything was just dream. Graham wasn't a real person. She was so confused that it felt vivid to her. However, she tried to forget it and enjoy her holiday with Sarah and Iris.
A few days after the holiday, Ammanda have an appointment with a movie company.
She reminded what boss said when waiting the owner. "This one is really important! You should contract it."
Eventually, the owner came and she can't say anything when saw the owner's face.
"....It's you..G..Gra.."
"Sorry? What did you say?"
"Oh, nothing. Sorry. I am Ammanda."
"Hi. Nice meet you, I am the boss, Graham."
She can't stop looking at him. The face, voice and name; everything matches with person who met her at dream.
The contraction is accomplished well.
"I'm appreciate for contract with our company. We will do our best." she promised.
"Thank you. Hum...Anyway are you busy now? Would you like to have a coffee with me?" Graham asked.
"Have we meet before? You were staring me while we had a meeting."
"Sorry. I just.."
"You can just tell me freely. I'm just wondering."
"Um...Okay..I had a dream..."
While Graham heard Ammanda's dream story, he smiled.
"Wow. That's unbelievable. Wow..."
"Yes, it is."
(The scene of time jumped up.)
After 2 years later, Graham and Ammanda promise loving each other forever.
"I love you Ammanda."
"I love you too, you're destiny of my life."
Maybe it can say that the dream presented soulmate to Ammanda.
Do you believe the existence of 'destiny' of your life?
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This is the end of my fanfiction. Thank you for reading my story "Destiny of my life". I really concentrated on writing and wish you guys like it :)
oh good, buddy, your idea is nice,
ReplyDeleteChange house... em it's interesting
and Ammanda has a good friend who is Iris...
I wonder, your next story...
I watched this movie before. Your fanfiction is really similar as the original, isn't it? Or may be you want to change it from where you stopped that they said goodbye to each other. I'm really looking forward to your story and hopefully that it can surprise everyone. Further more, I do love your writing. It is natural and you can control the dialogue very well.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I really like your story..
ReplyDeleteWhile I read your story, I want to watch original movie.
Anyway, I will expect impressive final story.
To SunHwa~*
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Yeb! Ammanda has a good friend Iris and Sarah as well!~
I'm thinking about the next story going.
To Jing Lin~*
ReplyDeleteHave you watch it? Isn't it interesting? Yes it is quite similar but if you read my story carefully, you will see some different details. For example, including the character of 'Sarah'. Also I will change the ending. I thought the idea of 'Exchange home'is really good one so I want to keep it :) Anyway I'm happy that you enjoy it!~
To Ghipum~*
ReplyDeleteIf you watch this movie, you will like it !
Ha ha~:) Although I'm worried that everyone's expecting my one,I will try to write the final story so that you guys like it.
To Sunhwa~*
ReplyDeleteI changed Iris parts of the story. I think it is good to focus on Ammanda so that the story is going more naturally :D
All happening is amanda's dream??...
ReplyDeleteI like your decision. It is good idea to make expecting final episode for everyone who watched this original movie...
I am going to watch this movie in holiday.
oh my god... incredible
ReplyDeleteyour idea is surprise...
I will try to watch this movie this weeked...
The end is so romantic~~~I love what did to this story. Worm me up~~~ What a great job you done.
ReplyDeleteI still can remember that when Holiday and SawIII were showing on same time, me and one of my friend choose to watch Holiday and other three choose to watch SawIII at St Lukes and on same night. They looked so awful and one of them vomited after watched SawIII, I thought I made a right choice that night. HAHAHA~~~~ You make me want to watch it again.
To Ghipum~*
ReplyDeleteHa ha!
If you watch original one, it will give you another impression :)
I really recommend this movie!!
To Sunhwa~*
ReplyDeleteWas it okay? I was worried about the ending.
I think you will like it when you watch this movie :D
To Jing Lin~*
ReplyDeleteActually in my opinion, it is better to watch romantic story then scary movie. You did make great choice! There was nobody who watched this movie~ but you have! I was happy that communicate with you :)